Homework
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Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Have you ever appreciated a sunset?
Were you alone or with someone special?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I have appreciated a sunset alone and also I have appreciated a sunset with my mother. Actually, mother and I like to see the sunset really, so I usually see the sunset when I do not want to think anything. It makes me relieve.That is why I like to see the sunset. It dose not matter to see the sunset alone or with someone special.
CORRECTIONS:
I have appreciated a sunset alone and also, I have appreciated a sunset with my mother. Actually, mother and I really like to see the sunset. I usually see the sunset when I do not want to think of anything. It makes me feel relieved. That is why I like to see the sunset. It does not matter to see the sunset alone or with someone special.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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