Homework

2019-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone special? I have appreciated a sunset alone and also I have appreciated a sunset with my mother. Actually, mother and I like to see the sunset really, so I usually see the sunset when I do not want to think anything. It makes me relieve.That is why I like to see the sunset. It dose not matter to see the sunset alone or with someone special.

강사 첨삭

  

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Have you ever appreciated a sunset?
Were you alone or with someone special?

Please answer in complete sentences.                      

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I have appreciated a sunset alone and also I have appreciated a sunset with my mother. Actually, mother and I like to see the sunset really, so I usually see the sunset when I do not want to think anything. It makes me relieve.That is why I like to see the sunset. It dose not matter to see the sunset alone or with someone special.

 

 

 

 

 

CORRECTIONS: 

 

I have appreciated a sunset alone and also, I have appreciated a sunset with my mother. Actually, mother and I really like to see the sunset. I usually see the sunset when I do not want to think of anything. It makes me feel relieved. That is why I like to see the sunset. It does not matter to see the sunset alone or with someone special.

 

 

 

** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

 

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