homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework for today.
You\'ve written two essays today! I\'m impressed! ^_^
Basketball is the most popular sport in my country.
I also used to play basketball with my friends but I don\'t do it anymore.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
What sport is more exciting to watch: football, soccer, baseball, basketball or something else? What sport is more exciting to watch: football, soccer, baseball, basketball or something else?
I thinks Football is very Exciting Sports rather than other sports.
>> I thinks football is more exciting than the other sports.
Football is dynamic sports more than another sports.
>> Football is a more dynamic sports than the other sports.
I often watched football TV at my home with my friends .
>> I often watch football on TV at my home with my friends .
Also, I played football with my friends in the park near my house.
>> I also play football with my friends at the park near my house.
football is one of most favorite sports.
>> Football is one of the most favorite sports in Korea.
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