Homework!!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!~
It\'s actually the first time I\'ve heard of this place, but if given the chance, I would love to visit it one day. ^^
Thank you for doing your homework. See you!
~T. Elisha
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Do you know Yu Gwan-Sun memorical place?
>> Do you know what the Yu Gwan-Sun Memorial Place is?
or:
>> Have you heard of the Yu Gwan-Sun Memorial Place?
I think the best historical site there.
>> I think it is the best historical site here.
I was learned their a strong belief,will and mind thar they can do these.
>> I learned about their strong belief, will, mind and the ways on how they do these.
Yu Gwan-Sun memorial place locaded in Byung Chun.
>> Yu Gwan-Sun is a memorial place located in Byung Chun.
I\'m living in the Byung Chun. :)
>> I\'m living in Byung Chun.
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