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2019-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don\'t like person who is very mean to me. And I also don\'t like someone who haggard. I like someone who is really kind. And also my friends are not very mean and haggard so I really like my friends. They are also kind.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for your composition.

I would like to clarify one thing.

What do you mean when you say a person is haggard?

We\'re going to discuss this in class so that you can explain.

I\'ll talk to you later!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t like person who is very mean to me.

>> I don\'t like a person who is very mean to me.

And I also don\'t like someone who haggard.

>> I also don\'t like someone who is haggard.

I like someone who is really kind.

>> Correct

And also my friends are not very mean and haggard so I really like my friends.

>> My friends are not mean and haggard so I really like my friends.

They are also kind.

>> Correct

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