Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.
I would like to clarify one thing.
What do you mean when you say a person is haggard?
We\'re going to discuss this in class so that you can explain.
I\'ll talk to you later!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t like person who is very mean to me.
>> I don\'t like a person who is very mean to me.
And I also don\'t like someone who haggard.
>> I also don\'t like someone who is haggard.
I like someone who is really kind.
>> Correct
And also my friends are not very mean and haggard so I really like my friends.
>> My friends are not mean and haggard so I really like my friends.
They are also kind.
>> Correct
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