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Hi [이름]!
You have a very nice imagination. ^^
I would love to see that movie!
~~t. Ally
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If I could make my own movie, it would be about my dreams.
>> CORRECT!
It could be a realistic dream or a completely imaginary things such as using magic, life in other planets etc.
>> It could be a realistic dream or a completely one, with things like magic, life in other planets etc.
I can be sure that whatever the contents are, it will be something that someone might have dreamed once in their life.
>> I can be sure that whatever the contents are, it will be something that someone might have dreamed of once in their life.
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