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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I appreciate the effort. The future is definitely uncertain. Although we don\'t know what lies ahead, we need to be ready for it.
- T. Beth
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Future society has uncertainty continuously, and we have to live in this society.
>>> Future society is uncertain and we have to live in it.
So, I think we need to have representative three of abilities.
>>> So, I think there are three things to put into consideration.
First, We have to know humanities that is study about a human.
>>> First, we have to know humanities which studies about humans.
Learning the humanities can be thought to try in order to understand a society and a human.
>>> Learning humanities can be taught to understand the society and human beings.
Second, it is the information ability on economy.
>>> CORRECT.
while humanities tell people about understanding on relationship between people and society, economy knowledge tell about on survival between people and society.
>>> While humanities tell people about understanding the relationship between people and the society, economy knowledge tells about the survival between people and the society.
Arming through economy knowledge is only weapon in uncertain society.
>>> Arming through knowledge on economy is the only weapon to deal with the uncertain society.
Finally, it is new technology abilities.
>>> Last but not the least is the new technology abilities.
Each person has to increase own ability to need for now.
>>> Each person has to increase his/her own ability which is needed now.
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