HOMEWORK

2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I like tangerine. 2. I will turn down the music because it\'s loud. 3. My Mom came home it 2pm. 4. I will do my projact. 5. My Dad put on a DVD when I was rede a book. 6. You will walk quickly,Jean^^ 7. Walk slowly,Mom! 8. You speak loudly,Dad!!!! 9. Please speak quietly! 10. You paint beautifully,Anna!! From:[이름],To:Jean-Hi Jean! Thank you for teach me \'scream\'.Good Bye!See you on wensday!-

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. I like tangerine.
>> I like tangerines.

2. I will turn down the music because it\'s loud.
>> correct

3. My Mom came home it 2pm.
>> My Mom came home at 2pm.

4. I will do my projact.
>> correct

5. My Dad put on a DVD when I was rede a book.
>> My Dad put on a DVD when I was reading a book.

6. You will walk quickly,Jean^^
>> You will walk quickly, Jean.^^
>> or: Walk quickly, Jean.

7. Walk slowly,Mom!
>> Walk slowly, Mom!

8. You speak loudly,Dad!!!!
>> Speak loudly, Dad!

9. Please speak quietly!
>> correct

10. You paint beautifully,Anna!!
>> You paint beautifully, Anna!!

From:[이름],To:Jean-Hi Jean! Thank you for teach me \'scream\'.Good Bye!See you on wensday!-
>>
Hi Jean!

Thank you for teaching me \'scream\'.
Good Bye! See you on Wednesday!

[이름]~~

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