Homework

Hello Seong Won!

Thank you for your composition today.

Please take note of the expressions conveying general thoughts.

Please also avoid using conjunctions in the beginning of sentences.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I like sunset more than sunrise.
>> I like sunsets more than the sunrise.
I once tried to watch a sunset on new year\'s eve, so I did\'t sleep until 5 o\' clock a.m.
>> I once tried to watch a sunset on New Year\'s Eve, so I did\'t sleep until 5 o\' clock a.m.
And when I start to thought \'When will the sun rise?\' , I realize that the sky was very bright.
>> Just when I started to think, \"When will the sun rise?\" , I realized that the sky was already very bright.
The sun was already rose, and I didn\'t know it and keep waiting.
>> The sun already rose and I hadn\'t noticed it.
And from that time, I start to hate sunrise.

>> That was the time when I started to hate watching the sunrise.