homework

2019-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

1. _when___ I have a test I\'m always very nervous. 2. The exam was difficult _but___ Bob passed it easily. 3. I can\'t buy a new car _because___ I haven\'t got enough money. 4. It\'s very late _because___ I\'m very tired. 5. I didn\'t know _where__ to go. Hello, teacher~ I am so busy working today because spread to illness livestock. I spray disinfectant around a factory in the morning. After working, I will go to hairshop to hair cutting and go to message. and I will cook Spicy grilled chicken. This is buy to market , but it is so delicious. Have a nice day~ See you~!

강사 첨삭

Hi there~! Sir Harry! T[이름]ks for doing your best in your homework. See you! Have a nice day!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

1. _when___ I have a test I\'m always very nervous. 

>>> CORRECT
2. The exam was difficult _but___ Bob passed it easily.

>>> CORRECT
3. I can\'t buy a new car _because___ I haven\'t got enough money.

>>> CORRECT
4. It\'s very late _because___ I\'m very tired.

>>> It\'s very late and I\'m very tired.
5. I didn\'t know _where__ to go. 

>>> CORRECT

Hello, teacher.

>>> CORRECT
I am so busy working today because spread to illness livestock. 

>>> I am so busy working today because there\'s an illness which spread in livestock. 
I spray disinfectant around a factory in the morning. 

>>> I spray disinfectant around the factory in the morning. 
After working, I will go to hairshop to hair cutting and go to message. and I will cook Spicy grilled chicken.

>>> After work, I will go to the hair salon for my hair cut and I will cook spicy grilled chicken.
This is buy to market , but it is so delicious. 

>>> I will buy it in the market. It is so delicious. 
Have a nice day~ See you~!

>>> CORRECT

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