Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I can see your effort in coming up with this composition.
Please take note of the proper use of articles and prepositions.
It takes time and practice to get it right but I know you\'ll get there.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I took respect to my artist-teacher.
>> I have great respect for my art teacher.
She started drawing at 57 years.
>> She has been drawing for 57 years.
She is my teacher and nowadays she is my friend.
>> She is my teacher and nowadays, she is also my friend.
Fortunately, I learn to draw to her for 4 years so I made debut a painter.
>> Fortunately, I have been learning how to draw from her for 4 years so I could debut as a painter.
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