Homework

Hello [이름]!

You gave good advantages of watching a sunrise and a sunset.

It would be better if you could make a choice as statement asked for.

you can provide more similarities and differences the next time.

Practice more!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I like sunset better than sunrise.

>> I like watching sunsets more than sunrises.

There is a three reason.

>> There are three reasons.

First, If you want to see sunrise, you need to get up early.

>> First, if you want to see a sunrise, you need to get up early.

But If you want to see sunset, you don\'t need to get up early.

>> However, if you want to see a sunset, you don\'t need to get up early.

Second, When the day start I have to do something tired such as math homework and school homework.

>> Second, when the day starts, I have to do a lot of things like my Math homework and other schoolwork. 

So I feel happy when the day or week end.

>> That\'s why I feel happy when the day or the week ends.

Last I like the sky that is being dark.

>> Lastly, I like to watch the sky grow dark.

It is really cool.

>> Correct

But I think sunrise is also cool and beautiful.

>> However, I think the sunrise is also cool and beautiful.