Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I would like to read a book. I want to read new book I bought.
I did not read it yet even I bought 3 days ago. In addition, I want to see
\"Aqua Man\". One of my favorite movie is all of the Marble movies, so
I want to see as well. The last thing, I would like to hang out with my dog. I
could not hang out with my dog. I feel really sorry to mt dog.
CORRECTIONS:
I would like to read a book. I want to read the new book I bought.
I did not read it yet even though I bought it three days ago. In addition, I want to see \"Aqua Man.\" Most of my favorite movies are all from Marvel, so I want
to see this as well. The last thing, I would like to hang out with my dog.
I don’t have time to hang out with my dog. I feel really sorry for it.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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