Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Do you have any plans for your Lunar New Year (Seollal)?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I have a plan for my Lunar New Year. Is it Seollal? Anyway, I am
going to work on Seollal. I do not want to work really, but I have to work.
After work, I will cook a traditional Korean food such as Bul go gi, Gyeon,
Dduck guk with my family. Also, I will hang out with my younger brother and
nephews. I am looking forward to this Seollal because I will go to Australia in
April. It means I will not have next Seollal.
CORRECTIONS:
I have a plan for my Lunar New Year. Is it Seollal? Anyway, I am
going to work on Seollal. I do not want to work really, but I have to work.
After work, I will cook traditional Korean foods such as Bul go gi, Gyeon, Dduck guk with my family. Also, I will
hang out with my younger brother and nephews. I am looking forward to this
Seollal because I will go to Australia in April. It means, it is unlikely that I would be able to celebrate the next Seollal.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. You just have a few mistakes, so well done! J Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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