Homework

2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Q. How do you solve your problems? A. Whenever I have a big problem, I get some advices from my parents or friends. For example, when I failed to enter the university that I wanted, I got advices from my parents and decided to try it again. After a year, I entered the university. Here is one more example. When I had a trouble with my friend, I could solve it thanks to my another friend\'s advice.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

Please keep up the good work!

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Teacher ELLY.

Homework

Q. How do you solve your problems?

A. Whenever I have a big problem, I get some advices from my parents or friends.

>>Whenever I have a big problem, I get some advice from my parents or friends.

or>>Every time I am facing a huge problem, I go to my parents or friends for some advice.

For example, when I failed to enter the university that I wanted, I got advices from my parents and decided to try it again.

>>For example, when I failed to enter the university that I wanted, I got some advice from my parents, so I decided to try it again.

After a year, I entered the university.

CORRECT!

or>>After one year, I started my university studies.

Here is one more example.

CORRECT!

or>>Here is another example.

When I had a trouble with my friend, I could solve it thanks to my another friend\'s advice. 

>>When I had trouble with my friend, I was able to solve it, thanks to my other friend\'s advice. 

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