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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this one. It\'s good that despite your busy schedules, you still find time to hang out together. That\'s how it should be to keep the friendship.
- T. Beth
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I don\'t usually decide certain restaurants when eating out with friends.
>>> I don\'t usually decide on certain restaurants when eating out with friends.
We usually eat out to restaurants where it is located near school.
>>> We usually eat out to restaurants which are located near the school.
These days, I and friends have very busy days to prepare future, in which I prepared for contest and friends have prepared for getting a job.
>>> These days, my friends and I are busy preparing for the future where I prepared for the contest and friends have been preparing for getting a job.
Because of these reasons, we usually meet in a school while I study in laboratory and friends study in library.
>>> Because of these reasons, we usually meet in school while I study in laboratory and friends study in the library.
Because preference of favor is very different between me and friends, we usually buy lunch boxes each other.
>>> Because preference on food is very different between me and friends, we usually buy our own lunch boxes.
After that, we bring these lunch boxes to laboratory and eat while watching Youtube through large size TV.
>>> OR: After that, we bring these lunch boxes to the laboratory and eat while watching Youtube on the large size TV.
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