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2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Er... I don\'t know I undetstand the question, but I can\'t think about good questions to ask someone I just met. The questions which I do to a person I just met is mostly \'Where can I go to~?\'. And if the person is my classmate or someone like it, I usually ask the person\'s name. I think this writing is out of question, but I can\'t think the way how to write thins better.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

When we first meet someone, we try to make small talk.

Are there questions that you usually ask to keep the conversation going?

Are there questions you avoid because it might offend another?

These were the things you had to consider when writing about this topic.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Er... I don\'t know I undetstand the question, but I can\'t think about good questions to ask someone I just met.
>> I\'m not sure if I understood the question but I can\'t think of good questions to ask someone I have just met.
The questions which I do to a person I just met is mostly \'Where can I go to~?\'.
>> Mostly, I ask for directions from people I\'ve just met.
And if the person is my classmate or someone like it, I usually ask the person\'s name.
>> I use the person\'s name if he or she is a classmate or acquaintance.
I think this writing is out of question, but I can\'t think the way how to write thins better.

>> I think I\'m writing off-topic here but I can\'t think of any other way to do this.

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