Homework

2019-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

What would you most like to learn? I like to learn to make a coffee as a hobby. I want to learn Latte art. It is really difficult but It is beautiful. Actually, I loves a coffee, so I want to learn everything about coffee. If I have a chance, I will study Cherry tree. It is name of the coffee tree. We can say that Cherry coffee. My major is life science it is similar to Biology, so the coffee tree is related to my major. I want to learn about coffee and how to make a coffee as well.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi Charlie,

  Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

What would you most like to learn?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I like to learn to make a coffee as a hobby. I want to learn Latte art.
It is really difficult but It is beautiful. Actually, I loves a coffee, so I want to learn everything about coffee. If I have a chance, I will study Cherry tree. It is name of the coffee tree. We can say that Cherry coffee. My major is life science it is similar to Biology, so the coffee tree is related to my major. I want to learn about coffee and how to make a coffee as well.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I like to learn how to make coffee as a hobby. I want to learn Latte art.
It is really difficult but
it is beautiful. Actually, I love coffee, so I want to learn everything about coffee. If I have a chance, I will study Cherry tree. It is the name of the coffee tree, so we can actually call it Cherry coffee. My major is Life Science and it is similar to Biology, so the coffee tree is related to my major. I want to learn about coffee and how to make coffee as well.

 

** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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