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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. I hope things will work out the way you want them. It would be a great holiday if it does. Fighting!

- T. Beth

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I can\'t often treat friends because I\'m almost broke.

>>> CORRECT.  

Although I earn little money, I live alone and don\'t receive financial support from parents, so I can\'t gather a lot of money.

>>> Although I earn little money, I live alone and don\'t receive financial support from my parents so I can\'t save a lot.  

But, when I can afford to treat friends, I don\'t concern and I\'m willing to treat friends.

>>>  But when I can afford to treat friends, It wouldn\'t matter and I\'m willing to treat them.

They also know that I live alone and don\'t have much money, so they often treat me.

>>> CORRECT.  

I know this fact and always think that I have to pay back for their help, in which I try to treat friends when I get some money.

>>> I know this fact and always think that I have to pay back for their help so I try to treat friends whenever I have money.  

If I receive money for award from Samsung contest, I want to go luxury buffet with parents in order to treat them.

>>> If I receive money as an award from the Samsung contest, I want to go to a luxury buffet with parents in order to treat them. 

I wish this thing will be happened tomorrow.

>>> I wish this thing will happen tomorrow.