homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you treasure your family?
I\'m treasure my family every day.
Because the family is more truthful than friends.
Especialy my mom is my most truthful person.
So,I treasure my famiy very much.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
While reading your essay, I could your love for your family. Our family is our greatest treasure.
~T. Kelly^^
How do you treasure your family?I\'m treasure my family every day.
>> I treasure my family every day.
Because the family is more truthful than friends.
>> Because my family is more truthful than friends.
Especialy my mom is my most truthful person.
>> Especially my mom, she is the most truthful person for me.
So,I treasure my famiy very much.
>> So, I treasure my family very much.
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