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2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Can you talk about two things you need to do everyday? I need phone and coffee everyday when I do something. I need to keep in touch my friends or my family. Actually, I am not usually useing phone. However, I think It is important thing for me. Lastly, I need a coffee. My favorite drink is coffee, so I am usually having a coffee everyday. It gives me energy. When I start a day, I need these things.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you talk about two things you need to do every day?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I need phone and coffee everyday when I do something. I need to keep in touch my friends or my family. Actually, I am not usually useing phone. However, I think It is important thing for me. Lastly, I need a coffee.
My favorite drink is coffee, so I am usually having a coffee everyday.
It gives me energy. When I start a day, I need these things.
 

 

CORRECTIONS:

I need a phone and coffee every day when I do something. I need to keep in touch with my friends or my family. Actually, I am not usually using a phone. However, I think it is an important thing for me. Lastly, I need a coffee.
My favorite drink is coffee, so I am usually having a coffee
every day.
It gives me energy. When I start a day, I need these things.
 

 

** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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