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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. Solving a problem is really a difficult thing to do because there are so many things to consider. Whatever you do, I hope you find the best solution for everything. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I think I easily burn out when processing hard work.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I think I easily get burned out when processing hard work.
I always get a stress that I must finish absolutely a work assigned for me so I use all my energy when I\'m assigned with a something.
>>> I always get stressed that I must absolutely finish the work assigned to me so I use all my energy on it.
These burdens often oppress me so hard that it make me burn out.
>>> These burdens often oppress me so hard that they burn me out.
When I confront this situation, I can\'t do anything and I\'m surrounded with fear whether I can finish this work.
>>> When I am confronted with this situation, I can\'t do anything and I\'m surrounded with fear whether I can finish this work or not.
>>> OR: When faced with this situation, I can\'t do anything and I am filled with fear that I might not be able to finish the work.
So, handling a pressuring situation is very important to me.
>>> CORRECT.
In my case, the best way handling that is to sleep.
>>> In my case, the best way of handling that is to sleep.
After I wake up, I often realize that it is not very important part in order to process the problem and I can think another solution to solve this.
>>> After I wake up, I often realize that it is not a very important part of processing the problem and I can think of another solution to solve this.
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