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2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Do you easily flare up when faced with a pressuring situation? How do you handle it? I think I easily burn out when processing hard work. I always get a stress that I must finish absolutely a work assigned for me so I use all my energy when I'm assigned with a something. These burdens often oppress me so hard that it make me burn out. When I confront this situation, I can't do anything and I'm surrounded with fear whether I can finish this work. So, handling a pressuring situation is very important to me. In my case, the best way handling that is to sleep. After I wake up, I often realize that it is not very important part in order to process the problem and I can think another solution to solve this.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. Solving a problem is really a difficult thing to do because there are so many things to consider. Whatever you do, I hope you find the best solution for everything. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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I think I easily burn out when processing hard work.

>>>  CORRECT.

>>>  OR: I think I easily get burned out when processing hard work.  

I always get a stress that I must finish absolutely a work assigned for me so I use all my energy when I\'m assigned with a something.

>>> I always get stressed that I must absolutely finish the work assigned to me so I use all my energy on it. 

These burdens often oppress me so hard that it make me burn out.

>>>  These burdens often oppress me so hard that they burn me out.

When I confront this situation, I can\'t do anything and I\'m surrounded with fear whether I can finish this work.

>>>  When I am confronted with this situation, I can\'t do anything and I\'m surrounded with fear whether I can finish this work or not.

>>> OR: When faced with this situation, I can\'t do anything and I am filled with fear that I might not be able to finish the work.

So, handling a pressuring situation is very important to me.

>>>  CORRECT.

In my case, the best way handling that is to sleep.

>>>  In my case, the best way of handling that is to sleep.

After I wake up, I often realize that it is not very important part in order to process the problem and I can think another solution to solve this.

>>>  After I wake up, I often realize that it is not a very important part of processing the problem and I can think of another solution to solve this.

 

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