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2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Oh, I couldn\'t ask you that after this vacation,you know, I am going to travel to Japan and then, can I take your call at Japan? Or should I postpone the class until I will return to Korea? I think people have their own characteristics and also there must be someone who is suitable to those. So when I meet new people, I tend to believe my instinct for them. If I don\'t feel something good, I don\'t try to be close with them. I have experienced many times that my instict was right. When I was serving in the army, my coworker gave me a bit bad feeling, but I try to be kind to him. But finally,he made several troubles in the army and I needed to handle those troubles by myself. Since then, I have a confidence that I need to follow my instinct.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

I can call you while you are in Japan but it will cost you because your phone should use roaming. You can put your class on hold if you don\'t want to do that. Enjoy your vacation!(\",)

~Lynn

Oh, I couldn\'t ask you that after this vacation,you know, I am going to travel to Japan and then, can I take your call at Japan? Or should I postpone the class until I will return to Korea?
>> Oh, I forgot to tell you that after this vacation I am going to travel to Japan, can I take your call in Japan? Or should I postpone the class until I will return to Korea?
I think people have their own characteristics and also there must be someone who is suitable to those.

>> correct!

So when I meet new people, I tend to believe my instinct for them.

>> So when I meet new people, I tend to trust my instinct about them.

 If I don\'t feel something good, I don\'t try to be close with them.

>> correct!

I have experienced many times that my instict was right.

>> correct!

When I was serving in the army, my coworker gave me a bit bad feeling, but I try to be kind to him.

>> When I was serving in the army, my companion gave me a bit of bad feeling, but I tried to be kind to him.

 But finally,he made several troubles in the army and I needed to handle those troubles by myself.

>> correct!

Since then, I have a confidence that I need to follow my instinct.

>> Since then, I have decided to follow my instinct.

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