Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite food to eat during the Seul-Nal celebration? Why do you like it?
My favorite food is dried persimmom, it’s because dried persimmom is very sweet
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji Won! I hope you had a great time during the holidays. Thank you for completing your homework. Make sure to always use proper spelling and punctuations on your sentences. See you in class!~~T.Dee
My favorite food is dried persimmom, it’s because dried persimmom is very sweet
>>My favorite food is dried persimmon. It’s because dried persimmom is very sweet.
>>OR: My favorite food is dried persimmon. I like it because dried persimmon is very sweet.
>>OR: My favorite food is dried persimmon because it\'s very sweet.
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