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2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I will give some advice to people to had a problem You have to different perspective and you think calmly about the problem So then you will be your mind calm Last week I\'m very busy So I didn\'t participate in our class This thursday I will see you again I\'m so happy

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Don\'t worry, I understand. ^^

See you soon!

Take care.

I\'m very excited to talk to you too! ^^




~~t. Ally



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I will give some advice to people to had a problem

>>If I could give some advice to someone who has a problem, I would say,


 You have to different perspective and you think calmly about the problem

>> \"You have to look at things at a different perspective and you have to think calmly.\"


 So then you will be your mind calm
>> \"So then, your thoughts will be calm.\"


 Last week I\'m very busy

>> I was very busy last week.


 So I didn\'t participate in our class

>> So I wasn\'t able to participate in our classes.


 This thursday I will see you again.

>> CORRECT!


 I\'m so happy.

>> CORRECT!

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