Homework

Hello [이름]!

Please be careful of the use of your pronouns.

It must be consistent throughout you composition.

Take note of the corrections below.

You will see the proper use of pronouns.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

If I met someone, First, I will ask his/her name.

>> When I meet someone for the first time, I will ask for his/her name.

Second, I will ask his/her phonenumber.

>> I will ask for his/her phone number next.

Because I need phonenumber to chat.

>> I need the number so that we can chat.

Last, I will ask where do you live.

>> Lastly, I will ask where he/she lives.

I need address to visit their house.

>> I need an address to visit his/her house.