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Hello [이름]! Thank you for this one. I am actually imagining in my head how things looked like inside the club. LOL.
- T. Beth
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When I went to Thailand, I have experienced a little culture shock.
>>> CORRECT.
especially, It is Pataya of the Thailand
>>> To be specific, it was in Pattaya in Thailand.
There are very corruption of public morals and develop sex tour and provocative electric sign.
>>> There was a great corruption of public morals like developed sex tour and provocative electronic signs.
so, the man does touting for business on the street to strip show club and leaflets are felled on the the street.
>>> So, the man does touting for business on the street to strip show clubs and leaflets are fallen on the the street.
A old white man date a young Thailand girl.
>>> An old white man was on a date with a young Thai girl.
My friend have taken a trip many time to Thailand. so, she didn\'t surprised that seen.
>>> My friend has taken many trips to Thailand so she was not surprised with that scene.
so she seemed experienced. so we went to strip club at her suggestion.
>>> She seemed experienced so we went to a strip club as she suggested.
I could never think of that, and I have no comment the show\'s story.
>>> OR: I can\'t even think about it and I have no words to describe how the show was like.
I\'ll leave that to your imagination^^^^^ LOL.
(= same mean?? I\'ll let you imagination about that)
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I\'ll let you imagine about that.
- Yes. This is a good expression.
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