Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear [이름]. Thank you for doing the homework. You are really a very persevering and diligent person and I commend you for that. Continue the drive and passion towards learning. Have a nice day and I’ll talk to you later. Cheers!
T. Andi =)
Hello, Andi.
>> Hello to you too [이름]. =)
It was nice to hear your voice. :)
>> My pleasure. It was nice to
hear your bubbly voice too. =)
I did the homework.
>> Thank you!
Have a great day!!
>> Thank you too and I do hope
you have a fabulous day too. ^_^
What are three things you always carry in your
bag and why?
I thought things in my bag.
>> I thought about the things
in my bag.
I always carry my phone, credit card Lipstick .
>> I always carry my phone,
credit card and lipstick.
The phone can do everything such
as navigation, payment, contact people, camera, etc.
>> Perfect [이름]!
And I often have the case when I
need pay it.
>> Bingo!
So I need credit card. I
sometimes feel uncomportable when I don’t have some cash.
>> So, I need my credit card. I
sometimes feel uncomfortable when I don’t have some cash.
3rd, Lipstick
>> Third is my lipstick.
If I don’t put on the lipstick, I
look sick. The people ask me, Are you okay? (Am I okay?)
>> If I don’t put on lipstick,
I look sick. The people ask me, Are you okay? (Am I okay?) (What kind of lipstick shade do you wear?)
Hahaha
>> Hahaha indeed. =)
So I have to carry the lipstick. =)
>> So, I have to carry my lipstick. (Lipstick is an essential must for all women ^_^)
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