Homework.

2019-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

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Hello, Andi. It was nice to hear your voice. :) I did the homework. Have a great day!! What are three things you always carry in your bag and why? I thought things in my bag. I always carry my phone, credit card Lipstick . The phone can do everything such as navigation, payment, contact people, camera, etc. And I often have the case when I need pay it. So I need credit card. I sometimes feel uncomportable when I don’t have some cash. 3rd, Lipstick If I don’t put on the lipstick, I look sick. The people ask me, Are you okay? (Am I okay?) Hahahah So I have to carry the lipstick. =)

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Hello my dear [이름]. Thank you for doing the homework. You are really a very persevering and diligent person and I commend you for that. Continue the drive and passion towards learning. Have a nice day and I’ll talk to you later. Cheers!


T. Andi =)


 


Hello, Andi.


>> Hello to you too [이름]. =)
It was nice to hear your voice. :)


>> My pleasure. It was nice to hear your bubbly voice too. =)
I did the homework.


>> Thank you!
Have a great day!!
>> Thank you too and I do hope you have a fabulous day too. ^_^
What are three things you always carry in your bag and why?
I thought things in my bag.


>> I thought about the things in my bag.
I always carry my phone, credit card Lipstick .
>> I always carry my phone, credit card and lipstick.


The phone can do everything such as navigation, payment, contact people, camera, etc.
>> Perfect [이름]!


And I often have the case when I need pay it.
>> Bingo!


So I need credit card. I sometimes feel uncomportable when I don’t have some cash.
>> So, I need my credit card. I sometimes feel uncomfortable when I don’t have some cash.


3rd, Lipstick
>> Third is my lipstick.


If I don’t put on the lipstick, I look sick. The people ask me, Are you okay? (Am I okay?)
>> If I don’t put on lipstick, I look sick. The people ask me, Are you okay? (Am I okay?)  (What kind of lipstick shade do you wear?)


Hahaha


>> Hahaha indeed. =)
So I have to carry the lipstick. =)


>> So, I have to carry my lipstick. (Lipstick is an essential must for all women ^_^)


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