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2019-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> How do you try to go trough a bad day? How do you encourage yourself? When I undergo a bad day, I always get a stress and feel fatigue because of this. Related to this, my solution is to get a enough sleep in order to increase concentration. Stress affect for me to get psychological stress and become fatigue rapidly so I tend to burn out when confronting this. If that condition is continuous, I can't process my work rather. My solution's step is like this. First, closing my eyes until I calm down. If that do not work, second, trying to sleep deeply. When doing this, I set alarm shortly. But, if I wake up with no spirit, I turn off alarm and sleep again until I wake up naturally.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. When bad things happen, don\'t lose spirit and hope. Always remember that bad things happen for a reason. It could be to teach you something or to make you stronger. If bad things happen, good things will happen next. Let\'s forward to it!

- T. Beth

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When I undergo a bad day, I always get a stress and feel fatigue because of this.

>>> When I undergo a bad day, I always get stressed and feel fatigue because of this.    

Related to this, my solution is to get a enough sleep in order to increase concentration.

>>> In relation to this, my solution is to get enough sleep in order to increase my concentration. 

Stress affect for me to get psychological stress and become fatigue rapidly so I tend to burn out when confronting this.

>>> Stress affects me psychologically and I become fatigued rapidly so I tend to get burned out when confronted with this.

If that condition is continuous, I can\'t process my work rather.

>>> If that condition continuous, I can\'t process my work efficiently.

My solution\'s step is like this.

>>> OR: Here are the steps I take to solve it.

First, closing my eyes until I calm down.

>>> CORRECT.

If that do not work, second, trying to sleep deeply.

>>> If that does not work, trying to sleep deeply is the next step.

When doing this, I set alarm shortly.

>>> When doing this, I set an alarm briefly.

But, if I wake up with no spirit, I turn off alarm and sleep again until I wake up naturally.

>>> But if I wake up with no spirit, I turn off the alarm and sleep again until I wake up naturally.


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