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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. When bad things happen, don\'t lose spirit and hope. Always remember that bad things happen for a reason. It could be to teach you something or to make you stronger. If bad things happen, good things will happen next. Let\'s forward to it!
- T. Beth
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When I undergo a bad day, I always get a stress and feel fatigue because of this.
>>> When I undergo a bad day, I always get stressed and feel fatigue because of this.
Related to this, my solution is to get a enough sleep in order to increase concentration.
>>> In relation to this, my solution is to get enough sleep in order to increase my concentration.
Stress affect for me to get psychological stress and become fatigue rapidly so I tend to burn out when confronting this.
>>> Stress affects me psychologically and I become fatigued rapidly so I tend to get burned out when confronted with this.
If that condition is continuous, I can\'t process my work rather.
>>> If that condition continuous, I can\'t process my work efficiently.
My solution\'s step is like this.
>>> OR: Here are the steps I take to solve it.
First, closing my eyes until I calm down.
>>> CORRECT.
If that do not work, second, trying to sleep deeply.
>>> If that does not work, trying to sleep deeply is the next step.
When doing this, I set alarm shortly.
>>> When doing this, I set an alarm briefly.
But, if I wake up with no spirit, I turn off alarm and sleep again until I wake up naturally.
>>> But if I wake up with no spirit, I turn off the alarm and sleep again until I wake up naturally.
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