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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sylvia! Thank you so much for this one. I think being considerate about others is important. We live in a society where we need to adjust and mingle with other people.
- T. Beth
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One of my pet peeves is the people who are self interested(selfish).
>>> One of my pet peeves is people who are self centered(selfish).
I think they don`t care about others.and they usually want to do they want.
>>> I think they don`t care about others and they usually just do what they want.
They don`t consider what others want to do.
>>> CORRECT.
sometimes,i consider if i need to keep along with her.
>>> Sometimes, I consider what the other person wants to keep along with her.
The other is people who has not kept their words.And people who has not been polite in oublic place.
>>> The others are people who do not keep their words and people who are not polite in public places.
relationship in our life is important.
>>> CORECT. (Relationships in our life is important.)
we need to get along with others.
>>> CORECT. (We need to get along with others.)
Therefor,we sometimes eat somethings,go somewheres,and do somethings even if we don`t want.
>>> Therefore, we sometimes eat something, go somewhere, and do some things even if we don`t want.
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