Homework

Q. What would make you the happiest? A. In my case, if I can pass an accounting licence test, I would feel like I\'m top of the world. Actually I was discouraged and lost confidence after failing the test before. It was a hard decision whether I try it again or not. Now, I decide to try it again and study for the test everyday. My only goal is to pass the test. So, if I can achieve the goal, I would be very happy.

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Homework

Q. What would make you the happiest?

A. In my case, if I can pass an accounting licence test, I would feel like I\'m top of the world.

>>In my case, if I will pass the Accounting licensing test, I would feel like I\'m on top of the world.

Actually I was discouraged and lost confidence after failing the test before.

>>Actually, I was discouraged and I lost my confidence after failing the test before.

It was a hard decision whether I try it again or not.

>>It was a hard decision whether I should try it again or not.

Now, I decide to try it again and study for the test everyday.

>>Right now, I decided to try it again to study for the test every day.

or>>At the moment, I have decided to try it again and I’m now studying every day for the test.

My only goal is to pass the test.

CORRECT!

or>>It is my main goal to pass the test this time.

So, if I can achieve the goal, I would be very happy. 

CORRECT!

or>>Thus, I would be very happy if I can achieve my goal.