Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
I commend you for this writing homework. You are really good at managing your time. You work, exercise, study and even still find time to watch your favorite program on TV, that\'s amazing! I hope I could also manage my time just like you. You are diligent so keep it up!
Teacher Josephine :)
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I work in the morning, 11:30 to 2:30.
>> I work in the morning from 11:30 a.m to 2:30 p.m.
After work, I come to home and I have lunch.
>> After work, I go home and I have lunch.
After lunch, I take a rest because I have to go to the gym.
>> CORRECT
I work out for 1~2 hours.
>> CORRECT
Next, I study in English like voca, grammer.
>> Next, I study English about vocabulary and grammar.
Finally, I take our class. I watch drama it is \"Modern Family\".
>> Finally, I take our class and watch the drama \"Modern Family\".
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