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Q. What were your first impressions of your friends?
A. My first impressions of my best friends were all positive.
CORRECT!
or>>The first impressions I got on all of my best friends, when I first met them, were very good!
It might be natural because people tend to be open and want to close to the person who has a positive impression.
>>It could be a natural thing because people tend to be open and want to be close to the person who gives a positive impression.
Although the first impressions of my friends were all positive, they were slightly different between each other and also some have changed after getting to know them.
>>Although, my first impressions of my friends were all positive, they were slightly different from each other. And also, some have changed after I got to know them.
For example, my best friend, Jihee looked like chic at the first time.
>>For example, my best friend Jihee, she looked chic on our first meeting.
After getting know her, however, I get to know that she is cool and outgoing.
>>After getting to know her, however, I got to realize that she is cool and outgoing.
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