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I went to the ski resort in wonju sity with my family during this holiday.At first I skied at beginers slope,but I want to go to harder course,So I went to intermediate slope.
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I went to the ski resort in wonju sity with my family during this holiday.
>> I went to a ski resort in Wonju City with my family during the holiday.
At first I skied at beginers slope,but I want to go to harder course,So I went to intermediate slope.
>> At first, I skied at the beginner\'s slope but I wanted go try the harder course so I went to the intermediate slope.
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