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2019-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Why is it important to start your day good (good situation and good attitude)? Positive thinking cause positive result. This effect is referred as to Rosenthal Effect and there is a anecdote related to this. Rosenthal who was educational psychology proceed experiment that after he gave teachers students' list picked up randomly while telling that these students' score will increase, their score increased actually. Because these students noticed expectation on them, positive result could came out. In other words, positive thinking and attitude can affect oneself and others, which elicit positive result consequently.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin young. Thank you once again for this. Very well said. That\'s why it is important to start your day with a positive perspective.

- T. Beth

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Positive thinking cause positive result.

>>>  Positive thinking causes positive result.   

This effect is referred as to Rosenthal Effect and there is a anecdote related to this.

>>>   This effect is referred to as the Rosenthal Effect and there is an anecdote related to this.

Rosenthal who was educational psychology proceed experiment that after he gave teachers students\' list picked up randomly while telling that these students\' score will increase, their score increased actually.

>>> Rosenthal who was an educational psychologist proceeded with the experiment where he asked teachers to choose students in the students\' list while telling that these students\' score will increase, their scores actually increased  

Because these students noticed expectation on them, positive result could came out.

>>> Because these students noticed expectation on them, a positive result could come out.

>>> OR:  Because these students noticed expectation on them, a positive result came out. 

In other words, positive thinking and attitude can affect oneself and others, which elicit positive result consequently.

>>> OR: In other words, positive thinking and attitude can affect oneself and others, which elicits positive results consequently.  

 

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