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2019-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I like take photo. 2.I will make a model snowman. 3.My mum made a photo book. 4.I like photo album. 5. Here\'s how to made a robot. 6.I will put the book in the backpack. 7.The stone is small. 8.The rock is big 9.You will tide shoelace. 10.You will made travellest tightly.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. I like take photo.
>> I like taking photos.

2.I will make a model snowman.
>> correct

3.My mum made a photo book.
>> My mum made a photo album.

4.I like photo album.
>> I like looking at my photo album.

5. Here\'s how to made a robot.
>> Here\'s how to make a robot.

6.I will put the book in the backpack.
>> correct

7.The stone is small.
>> correct

8.The rock is big
>> The rock is big. (Don\'t forget to period or full stop [ . ] at the end of the sentence.)

9.You will tide shoelace.
>> Tie your shoelace.

10.You will made travellest tightly.
>> I\'m not sure what you want to say in this sentence.~~
>> Example: I tied my shoelaces tightly.

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