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2019-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I remember that no one threw a surprise party for me. For example, when it\'s my birthday, I just tell my mom \'Today is my birthday.\' , then my mom makes something for me. There\'s no surprise party. But I like not having a surprise party. It\'s better to think \'What will be the dinner?\" than \'Will there be a party?\".

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

I should throw a surprise party for you.

When is your birthday?

You have used some unique expressions on your composition.

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I remember that no one threw a surprise party for me.
>> I remember that no one has ever thrown a surprise party for me.
For example, when it\'s my birthday, I just tell my mom \'Today is my birthday.\' , then my mom makes something for me.
>> For example, when it\'s my birthday, I just tell my mom \'Today is my birthday.\'

then my mom makes something for me.

>> My mom then cooks something for me.
There\'s no surprise party.
>> Correct
But I like not having a surprise party.
>> However, I like the fact that I don\'t get surprise parties.
It\'s better to think \'What will be the dinner?\" than \'Will there be a party?\".

>> It\'s better to wonder what I would have for dinner rather than whether or not I would be having a party.

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