Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.Make a short poem about your life.
Give at least 2 stanzas.
A.Title:Astro
Astro is the indispensable of my life.
By the way, I thank you for letting me live with Astro in the Astro.
In fact, I am more happy to see Astro when I am sad or happy.
Astro is like my eternal cure.
강사 첨삭
Great poem, Ruby!
You truly are one of the biggest fans of Astro. ^^
See you in class, sweetie.
~~t. Ally
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Title:Astro
>> CORRECT!
Astro is the indispensable of my life.
>> Astro is the one true indispensable thing in my life.
By the way, I thank you for letting me live with Astro in the Astro.
>> (I\'m not sure what you mean in this sentence.)
In fact, I am more happy to see Astro when I am sad or happy.
>> In fact, it makes me more glad to see Astro when I am feeling happy or sad.
Astro is like my eternal cure.
>> CORRECT!
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