Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
That was a really fun experience that you have shared.
You told the story beautifully.
Try to look at the sentence patterns below.
Study them and make sure to practice.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I really surprised at my birthday.
>> I was really surprised on my birthday.
My friends told me that let\'s play after school because it\'s your birthday.
>> My friends invited me to go out after school because it was my birthday.
But that day at school all of my friends are not talk to me and avoid me.
>> That day, my friends didn\'t talk to me and avoided me in school.
They even look like they are angry at me.
>> They even looked like they were angry.
When I ask them something they just keep saying \"Nothing\".
>> When I tried to ask them what\'s going on, they would say that nothing was wrong.
And after the school they bring me cake and their present.
>> Finally, they brought me a cake and some presents after school.
They deceive me.
>> They fooled me.
But I really felt really happy that I have really good friend.
>> However, I felt really happy because I had really good friends.
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