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2019-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I really surprised at my birthday. My friends told me that let\'s play after school because it\'s your birthday. But that day at school all of my friends are not talk to me and avoid me. They even look like they are angry at me. When I ask them something they just keep saying \"Nothing\". And after the school they bring me cake and their present. They deceive me. But I really felt really happy that I have really good friend.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

That was a really fun experience that you have shared.

You told the story beautifully.

Try to look at the sentence patterns below.

Study them and make sure to practice.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I really surprised at my birthday.

>> I was really surprised on my birthday.

My friends told me that let\'s play after school because it\'s your birthday.

>> My friends invited me to go out after school because it was my birthday.

But that day at school all of my friends are not talk to me and avoid me.

>> That day, my friends didn\'t talk to me and avoided me in school.

They even look like they are angry at me.

>> They even looked like they were angry.

When I ask them something they just keep saying \"Nothing\".

>> When I tried to ask them what\'s going on, they would say that nothing was wrong.

And after the school they bring me cake and their present.

>> Finally, they brought me a cake and some presents after school.

They deceive me.

>> They fooled me.

But I really felt really happy that I have really good friend.

>> However, I felt really happy because I had really good friends.

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