homework
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Where are the best places to go on vacation in your country?
My best places on vacation is 태백mountain snow festival.
I went to go this place with my father.
It was great.
I have a vacation day more, so it will have a more best time .
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Enjoy your winter vacation. I wish you could spend more time not only with your father but with the whole family.
Enjoy your day!
~T. Kelly^^
Where are the best places to go on vacation in your country?
My best places on vacation is 태백mountain snow festival.
>> The best place to go on vacation is 태백mountain snow festival.
I went to go this place with my father.
>> I went to this place with my father.
It was great.
>> Correct.
I have a vacation day more, so it will have a more best time .
>> If I have more vacation, then I can have my best time.
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