Homework

Hi, Charlie!

This is a very sad news. I hope that the woman would be punished accordingly. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework!

~Teacher Josephine~

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I saw the terrible news yesterday.

>> I saw a terrible news yesterday.

It is about dog.

>> It was about a dog.

I am dog person, so when I see that news I shocked.

>> I am a dog person, so when I saw the news I was shocked.

I will tell you the news.

>> CORRECT

A woman bought a puppy at veterinary clinic.

>> A woman bought a puppy at a veterinary clinic.

 Next day, she complained that the puppy ate the poop.

>> The next day, she complaint that the puppy had eaten its poop.

 I think it needs to puppy because the puppy needs time to adjust.

>> I think was normal, because the puppy needed time to adjust.

Anyway, suddenely she threw the puppy and puppy died.

>> Anyway, she suddenly threw the puppy and it instantly died.

I can not believe.

>> I couldn\'t believe it.

I can not understand her. How could she do that action?

>> I couldn\'t understand her. How could she act like that?