Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
You are right this movie is very touching. I\'ll try to watch it when I have a free time.(\",)
~Lynn
I\'ve watched many movies over years, so I can\'t remember all the movies.
>> I\'ve watched many movies over the years, so I can\'t remember all the movies.
Of course, several movies are in my mind, so I want to introduce the one of those movies.
>> Of course, several movies are in my mind, so I want to introduce one of those movies.
\"Be with you\" is the best movie among what I have watched. In this movie, I could feel real love and sadness.
>> correct!
In short for this movie, the wife died because of the disease and the husband and son were missing her for few years.
>> In this movie,the wife died because of a disease and her husband and son were missing her for a few years.
One day, one woman who looks like his wife was found dropped down in the mountain.
>> One day, they found a woman who looks like his wife who fell from the mountain.
That woman and they were living together but that woman know that she should part from them someday.
>> That woman lived with them but she knew she needed to part with them someday.
Finally, she went from them and they could overcome from sadness because they could do many things with that woman that they couldn\'t do with their wife or mom.
>> Because of that woman, they were able to do many things they couldn\'t do with the wife who died.
From this film,I thought I need to do well to my near people in the present. This is why I think this is the best movie.
>> From this film, I realized that I need to kind and show my love to the people close to me. That is why I think this is the best movie I have ever watched.
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