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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. It\'s true what they say. We only realize the value of something once it\'s gone.

- T. Beth

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When I lived with family, I can\'t feel family is very important.

>>>  When I lived with family, I couldn\'t feel family was very important. 

In that times, because I could see family anytime, I didn\'t think effect for family to affect to me.

>>> At that time, because I could see my family anytime, I didn\'t think about being affectionate towards my family..  

However, the time when realizing precious things is the one when losing this.

>>>   However, the time when we realize things are precious is when we lose them.

After my family left Seoul and went to end point of south in Korea, I feel alone and miss family.

>>> After my family left Seoul and went to end point of south in Korea, I feel alone and missed my family.  

After that, I try to do well and feel appreciation to my parents while seeing them who live in countryside hard.

>>> After that, I tries to do well and feel appreciation towards my parents while seeing them who are living hard in the countryside.  

We always have to be alert on being accustomed in order not to lose something precious.

>>>  OR: We always have to be cautious about taking things for granted in order not to lose something precious.