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Hi [이름]!
I\'ve had the same experience too. :(
Sadly, some people do not value the things other people do for them.
Nowadays, I only give money to the elderly beggars.
Thank you for sharing your experience with me. ^^
~~t. Ally
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When I see someone who is begging for money on the sidewalk, I don\'t give some money to begging someone
>> When I see someone who is begging for money on the sidewalk, I don\'t give them any money.
Because I had a bad memory.
>> CORRECT!
When I was child, I gave some money to begging people
>> When I was a child, I gave some money to a beggar.
No sooner than the taken money, that person bought a bottle of alchol
>> As soon as he had taken the money, that person bought a bottle of alcohol.
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