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Teacher ELLY.
Q. Why do some people chicken out?
A. People chicken out of trying something because they would lose anything if they fail.
>>People chicken out from trying something because they would lose everything if they fail.
If they lose nothing, they won\'t hesitate try something.
>>If they don’t have anything to lose, they won\'t hesitate to try something out.
However, everything has a price to pay for.
>>However, everything has a price.
or>>However, there is a price to be paid for.
or>>However, everyone has to pay the price.
People could lose their time, wealth, or even a person they love.
CORRECT!
or>>We can lose time, money or even those we love.
The more people are afraid of losing them, the more chicken they would be.
>>The more people are afraid of losing things, the more they chicken out.
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