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2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

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Describe your best friend and what are your similarities. I have a lot of best friends, so I will tell you one of the friends. He is my middle school friend until now. He is different with me really. However, we are best friend. I am little bit talktive, but he is quite. I am good at playing game bue he is not. I do not know why we are so friendly despite we are different. Sometimes, we are good match each other. We hang out once a week eveyday.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Charlie!


Sometimes good friends are the ones who are very opposite from us. I think that\'s the beauty of having friends. They could always go against the things we should not do. Thank you for telling something about your best friend! See you in the class tomorrow!


~Teacher Josephine

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I have a lot of best friends, so I will tell you one of the friends.

>> I have a lot of best friends, so I will tell you about one of them.


He is my middle school friend until now.

>> He has been my friend since middle school up until now.


He is different with me really.

>> He is really different from me.


However, we are best friend.

>> However, we are still best friends.


I am little bit talkative, but he is quite.

>> CORRECT


 I am good at playing game bue he is not.

>> I am good at playing games but he is not.


 I do not know why we are so friendly despite we are different.

>> I don\'t know how did we become friends when we are very different from each other.


 Sometimes, we are good match each other.

>> Sometimes, we do friendly match against each other.


We hang out once a week eveyday.

>> We hang out once a week.


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