Homework

2019-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning to you, Andi. I ‘m little bit tired today. I know you are tired too. Let’s cheer up!! Bye =) Essay. In 5 or more sentences, answer the question: What is love? When I sow this question, I remembered the bible verse. Love is patient long time, love is ..... Hahahah :))) I think love is thinking of someone before me. Love is thinking of a way to make one feel better. And when I eating delisouls food, I go to good place, and I have good thing, I recall my family. When we sad or happy, we always doing together. I think this is love.

강사 첨삭

Yahoo! It’s Friday and I am really happy and glad. I am looking to the weekends because it means longer sleep. Yeah, love…Love is the greatest of them all. ^_^ Thank you for the homework again [이름]. I’ll talk to you later. Ciao!

T. Andi =)

 

Good morning to you, Andi.

>> A fun- filled morning to you too my dear!
I ‘m little bit tired today.

>> I know, anyway it’s Friday already.
I know you are tired too.

>> Yes, I am.
Let’s cheer up!!

>>Let’s do that!
Bye =)
>> Talk to you later.
Essay. In 5 or more sentences, answer the question: What is love?
When I sow this question, I remembered the bible verse.

>> When I saw this question, I remembered the bible verse.
Love is patient long time, love is .....

>> Correct!
Hahahah :)))

>> =)
I think love is thinking of someone before me.

>> Perfectly written!
Love is thinking of a way to make one feel better.

>> Your writing skill is getting better.
And when I eating delisouls food, I go to good place, and I have good thing, I recall my family.

>> And when I am eating delicious food, I go to good place, and I have good thing, I recall my family.
When we sad or happy, we always doing together. I think this is love.

>> When we are sad or happy and we always d things together. I think this is love.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·