Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Yahoo! It’s Friday and I am really happy and glad. I am looking to the weekends because it means longer sleep. Yeah, love…Love is the greatest of them all. ^_^ Thank you for the homework again [이름]. I’ll talk to you later. Ciao!
T. Andi =)
Good morning to you, Andi.
>> A fun- filled morning to you too my dear!
I ‘m little bit tired today.
>> I know, anyway it’s Friday already.
I know you are tired too.
>> Yes, I am.
Let’s cheer up!!
>>Let’s do that!
Bye =)
>> Talk to you later.
Essay.
In 5 or more sentences, answer the question: What is love?
When I sow this question, I remembered the bible verse.
>> When I saw this question, I remembered the bible verse.
Love is patient long time, love is .....
>> Correct!
Hahahah :)))
>> =)
I think love is thinking of someone before me.
>> Perfectly written!
Love is thinking of a way to make one feel better.
>> Your writing skill is getting better.
And when I eating delisouls food, I go to good place, and I have good thing, I
recall my family.
>> And when I am eating delicious food, I go to good place,
and I have good thing, I recall my family.
When we sad or happy, we always doing together. I think this is love.
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