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2019-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think a fim subtitled in original language is better to learn that language. In my opinion, it is hard to translate the language because they have different cultures and concepts. It means if we want to learn another language, I had to learn their culture first. For example, I have experienced there were many errors when I tried to translate Korean to English directly. I have realized that I also have to learn their way of thinking. It has been difficult to me yet, but I am trying to understand and use their way of thinking. In this view, watching a film subtitled in original langauge can help to understand what sentences should be used in that situation. Thus, I think it is better to learn another language.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

If a person is interested to learn a language  or anything else, the learning process will be easier. But if you are forced to learn something, it makes it extremely difficult. Do you agree?

~Lynn

I think a fim subtitled in original language is better to learn that language.

>> I think a film subtitled in the original language is better to learn that language.

In my opinion, it is hard to translate the language because they have different cultures and concepts.

>> correct!

It means if we want to learn another language, I had to learn their culture first.

>> It means if we want to learn another language, we have to learn their culture first.

 For example, I have experienced there were many errors when I tried to translate Korean to English directly.

>> correct!

I have realized that I also have to learn their way of thinking.

>> correct!

 It has been difficult to me yet, but I am trying to understand and use their way of thinking.

>> It has been difficult to me but I am trying to understand and use their way of thinking.

 In this view, watching a film subtitled in original langauge can help to understand what sentences should be used in that situation.

>>  In this view, watching a film subtitled in the original language can help to understand what sentences should be used in that situation.

 Thus, I think it is better to learn another language.

>> correct!

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