Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
Thank you for your composition.
Please avoid expressing the same idea in different sentences.
Keep your homework short but simple and clear.
I know you can do this.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I never tried an extreme sports...Wait, I just chack the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports.
>> I have never tried any extreme sport.
Wait, I just chack the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports.
>> Upon checking the Internet, I see that inline skating is also an extreme sport.
I did\'t know it was an extrem sports.
>> I didn\'t know that it is considered an extreme sport.
If it is an extrem sports, then I tried extrem sports.
>> If that is true, then, I have already tried this kind of sport.
Except that, I never tried it.
>> That is the only one.
I want to trysky diving someday.
>> I want to try sky diving someday.
Many people say it\'s very exciting.
>> Correct
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