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2019-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I never tried an extreme sports...Wait, I just checked the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports. I did\'t know it was an extrem sports. I never tried an extreme sports...Wait, I just chack the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports. I did\'t know it was an extrem sports. If it is an extrem sports, then I tried extrem sports. Except that, I never tried it. I want to trysky diving someday. Many people say it\'s very exciting.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

Thank you for your composition.

Please avoid expressing the same idea in different sentences.

Keep your homework short but simple and clear.

I know you can do this.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon
I never tried an extreme sports...Wait, I just chack the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports.
>> I have never tried any extreme sport.

Wait, I just chack the internet, and it say inline skating is an extreme sports.

>> Upon checking the Internet, I see that inline skating is also an extreme sport.
I did\'t know it was an extrem sports.
>> I didn\'t know that it is considered an extreme sport.
If it is an extrem sports, then I tried extrem sports.
>> If that is true, then, I have already tried this kind of sport.
Except that, I never tried it.
>> That is the only one.
I want to trysky diving someday.

>> I want to try sky diving someday.

Many people say it\'s very exciting.

>> Correct

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