Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
What I always like about your homework is that every time a read it, I could feel your enthusiasm or every emotion about any topics I give you. I commend you on that! In addition, I\'d lke to tell you that I am envious of you, because you had been to Boracay already. I haven\'t been there. I hope someday I would!
Good night!
~Teacher Josephine
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The most about the Philippines I like is Filipinos.
>> What I like about the Philippines the most are the Filipinos.
The reason I thought they were kind.
>> The reason was they were kind.
They gave me good memory.
>> They gave me unforgettable good memories.
Actually, I don\'t have a bad memory.
>> Actually, I don\'t have any bad memory.
All memories are good about the Philippines.
>> CORRECT
I want to go there again and I want to meet my Filipino friends and teacher as well.
>> I want to go there again and meet my Filipino friends as well as my teachers.
In addition, I miss the Boracay.
>> In addition, I miss Boracay.
It was my first time to went there.
>> It was my first time to go there.
It was majestic.
>> CORRECT.
Anyway, I like Philippines whatever.
>> Anyway, I like everything about the Philippines.
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