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2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Thank you for showing me good a mention in bible. I think love is something wonderful but I don\'t know the exact meaning of it yet. I think there are many reasons for that. Their lovers have different appearances with themselves and also have different abilities with them. This is the point. I think people want to be satisfied with their lovers who have different abilities that they don\'t have.

강사 첨삭

Hey Jay,

Have you heard the saying \"opposites attract\"? It means people who are very different from each other are often attracted to each other. Do you agree to this?

~Lynn

Thank you for showing me good a mention in bible.

>> Thank you for sharing a Bible verse with me.

I think love is something wonderful but I don\'t know the exact meaning of it yet.

>> correct!

I think there are many reasons for that.

>> correct!

Their lovers have different appearances with themselves and also have different abilities with them.

>> Lovers have different appearances and they also have different abilities.

This is the point.

>> correct!

I think people want to be satisfied with their lovers who have different abilities that they don\'t have.

>> correct!

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